Finally, finally, I am reading "Brave New World" by Aldous Huxley. That's almost a sin for a SF fan.

I wasn't more than a few Kindle pages into this book when I thought: "Man, this guy can write." I don't say that phrase that often.

I think your writer's group would dismiss this fellow's writing as well.

No, your story is very intrigue: dystopia and SF. You got me wondering where to find the rest of the story.