Nice essay, Umair. The tone is this essay is reasonable and its motive pure. It should move the world forward.
The quote (not mine) also helps:
The world of humanity has two wings — one is women and the other men. Not until both wings are equally developed can the bird fly. Should one wing remain weak, flight is impossible. Not until the world of women becomes equal to the world of men in the acquisition of virtues and perfections, can success and prosperity be attained as they ought to be.